1. Did the pictures enhance the experience of my Twitterive, or are there too many?
2. Did I fully explain my reasons for wanting to move to California?
3. Was there a clear connection between my ties to both places (NJ and CA)?
4. Did you fell any sense of urgency from the writing?
5. Was this piece something you could easily understand/connect with?
6. I thought about adding in a few more song lyrics, from songs that really made me connect with the west coast. Would this addition be too much?
2. Did I fully explain my reasons for wanting to move to California?
3. Was there a clear connection between my ties to both places (NJ and CA)?
4. Did you fell any sense of urgency from the writing?
5. Was this piece something you could easily understand/connect with?
6. I thought about adding in a few more song lyrics, from songs that really made me connect with the west coast. Would this addition be too much?
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